Saturday, May 5, 2012

Currently In The Works: TMNT Character Study

I've always been a Leonardo fan, playing into my attraction toward stable and responsible characters.  However, my attention has been temporarily diverted to the temperamental and largely unstable brother, Raphael.

I'd like to argue that there's not much mystery to Leo's personality.  He works according a certain moral standard, which happens to be generally "goody-goody".  We expect that.  He's a green Captain America, in a sense.

Raphael doesn't work like that.  I wouldn't say that he is less of what Leo is.  Rather, he is often more.  Raph isn't confined to the responsibilities of leading a team, even if he occasionally wishes battles for the spot, but he doesn't lack responsibility.  Instead, he harbors a rather extreme sense of justice.  Leo considers what is best for the team, taking outside factors into consideration.  Raph acts on what is best for that moment, not wasting precious time to reconsider variables.  This doesn't necessarily make him a great leader, but he does get shit done.

Here's a portion of what I'm working on:

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ATLAS

"Raphael, you always bear the world's problems on your shoulders..."

Clouds of smog billowed overhead, compressing the scattered glimmers of green and red neon lights from the small corner shops below.  Florescent bulbs flickered in a few windows, occasionally illuminating the puddles of opalescent film that littered the streets before washing into the sewers.  Sometimes it collected in the fibers of a prostitute’s stockings as she teetered in poorly made knock-off heels, rushing to her first night’s appointment.  A few men might have followed behind, also on foot, leaving a trail of the grimy fluid with their polished loafers.  Crowds of similar types - whores, business men, thugs, and thieves - plagued the streets in intervals.  The entire place was damned. 

Perhaps that’s why he felt such affinity?

 From his perch on the ledge of an abandoned brick warehouse, Raphael waited for his first opportunity to intercede.  He had long become accustomed to the sounds of pain, and knew how to differentiate them from pleasure.  Although, he wasn’t so naïve to think they were mutually exclusive.  Long nights on rooftops made him privy to the strange interactions of human beings. 

Leo would a have a frickin’ heart attack.

The abnormally large turtle allowed a small smirk at the thought of his brother’s potential life-threatening shock and ultimately dismay.  Not that Leo was completely unaware of the odd rituals of human courtship.  They had the internet, after all.  And Mikey certainly wasn’t the only one viewing questionable videos when everyone should have been asleep.  Raph was just smart enough to not get caught.  The last thing he needed was to ruffle Leo’s already tight-ass sensibilities.

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